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You recently attended a training workshop organized by a local company. However, there were several issues that made the workshop less effective than expected. Write a letter to the company. In your letter: •Explain the problems you faced during the workshop •Describe how these problems affected your experience •Suggest what the company could do to improve future workshops

Dear Sir/ Madam, I am writing
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 to formally express concern with regard to the training workshop which was recently
organized
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 by your
insitute
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institute
. I trust your esteemed organisation will address
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 matter promptly, and I am grateful for your consideration. To provide context, I attended the session
of
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on
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 how to improve your workout routine on
2nd
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 of July 2025. During that, I faced Several problems, which
inculded
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included
miscommunication,
as well as
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inadeqaute
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inadequate
 parking facilities.
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as
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 a result, I had no other option than to park far away from the venue.
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,
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 matter is
siginificant
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significant
 because it not only affected my
experince
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experience
 but
also
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 had a major impact on
knowledge
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my knowledge
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 of the
phyical
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physical
 capacity of the human body.
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, owing to poor communication with the
tutor
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tutor,
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i
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I
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 was not able to understand concepts related to types of diets required during heavy
workout
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workouts
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. In light of the above, I respectfully suggest
in
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improving the parking facilities
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provide
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required
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the required
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trianing
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training
 to the tutor and checking their knowledge beforehand for future
trianing
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training
 programs. I sincerely appreciate your attention to
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 matter. Thank you for your time and support. Yours sincerely, Aayush Upadhyay.

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structure
Keep one idea in each paragraph for a clear flow.
content
Add exact details like time, place, and what went wrong.
language
Check spelling and grammar to keep the mark clean.
organization
Set your text in clear parts: intro, problems, impact, and fix plan.
tone
The note is polite and shows respect.
content
You name the problems and give a plan to fix.
convention
You close with thanks and a kind sign off.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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