the chart below shows the price in Euros of 800 grams of four types of bread in one European country from 2001 to 2005.

the chart below shows the price in Euros of 800 grams of four types of bread in one European country from 2001 to 2005.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for the chart below shows the price in Euros of 800 grams of four types of bread in one European country from 2001 to 2005.
The line graph provides the cost of four types of
bread
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(Wholegain, Brown, White,
Rye
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) in Euros between 2001 and 2005.
Overall
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, the figure
of
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brown
bread
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was the highest among the four types,
while
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rye
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bread
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was the cheapest throughout the period.
While
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wholegrain
bread
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had a sharp increase and fall, the prices of white and
rye
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bread
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followed an upward trend. In 2001, wholegrain and brown
bread
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were priced at around 0.9,
while
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white and
rye
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bread
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were both cheaper, starting at about 0.6. By 2002, the cost of wholegrain
bread
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peaked at 1.9, but
then
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dropped rapidly over the next two years to around 0.8 in 2004 before slightly
upwarding
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increasing
in 2005. Meanwhile, brown
bread
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saw an increase in price, rising from 0.9 in 2001 to around 1.6 in 2003. Despite a minor dip in 2004, it ended at approximately 1.7 in 2005. The price of white
bread
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increased gradually from 0.6 in 2001 to about 1.3 in 2005.
Rye
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bread
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remained the least expensive throughout, with only minor fluctuations, increasing slightly from 0.6 in 2001 to just under 0.8 by 2005.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words bread, rye with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Analyze
  • Price trend
  • Period
  • Increase / Decrease in price
  • Compare
  • Starting prices
  • Shift over time
  • Causes
  • Inflation
  • Cost of wheat
  • Consumer demand
  • Price volatility
  • Types of bread
  • Market trends
  • Economic conditions
  • Euros
  • 800 grams
  • European country
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