The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
From the diagram above, we can get the information about the production process of ethanol fuel from
corn
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. The procedure will have nine
step
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that will be explained below. First step to do is to put the fresh batch of
corn
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into the storage barn, after that, we need to
mille
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mill
the stored
corn
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before being cooked for about three to four hours with water. Next step is to
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the cooked
corn
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until
is
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separated into liquid
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and solid
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.
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process could take up to 48 hours or 2 days
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.
the
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liquid products that as been
seperated
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separated
will soon
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ethanol fuel, but before that, it needs a few
steps more
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for the fuel to be able to
used
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by us.
after
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the fermentation process, the separated liquid will next be steamed to purify the
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into ethanol.
after
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steamed
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for five hours, the liquid will be stored in the warehouse before being delivered to factories or outlets.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words corn with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • ethanol
  • corn
  • harvesting
  • milling
  • cooking
  • fermentation
  • distillation
  • dehydration
  • enzymes
  • fermentable sugars
  • concentration
  • anhydrous ethanol
  • fuel
  • processed
  • mixture
  • yeast
  • carbon dioxide
  • high temperatures
  • surface area
  • separation
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