The table and pie charts below show the number of research students in Australian universities in 2001 and 2010.

The table and pie charts below show the number of research students in Australian universities in 2001 and 2010.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The table and pie charts below show the number of research students in Australian universities in 2001 and 2010.
The table and pie charts provide information about the
number
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of
research
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students
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in Australian universities in 2001 and 2010, divided into local and international groups.
Overall
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it is clear that
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the total
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of
research
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students
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increased significantly during
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period, with international
students
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showing the greatest growth.
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, the proportion of international
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rose,
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the percentage of locals went down. In 2001, the
number
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of
research
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students
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was 38,849, of which the majority were locals (33,657) compared with only 5,192 international
students
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. By 2010, the total had risen to 54,081, with both groups increasing, but international
students
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saw the sharpest growth, almost tripling to 14,593. So, the share of international
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rose from 13% in 2001 to 27% in 2010. Looking
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the gender breakdown, local males and females made up almost equal shares in 2001, at 44% and 43% respectively.
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, in 2010, their proportions fell slightly to 38% and 35%.
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, the proportion of non-local male
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grew from 9% to 12%, and non-local females increased more noticeably from 4% to 15%. In summary,
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both local and international
research
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students
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grew in
number
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, the data highlight a rapid increase in international participation, especially among women.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 78%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, research, students with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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