The maps below give information about a plan to redevelop an industrial site. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below give information about a plan to redevelop an industrial site. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps below give information about a plan to redevelop an industrial site. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The two maps illustrate the current layout of the industrial field and the planned redevelopment scheduled for the future.
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, significant changes took place in the purpose of buildings and interior layout
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however
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, a rectangular arrangement has remained intact. Currently, the industrial area consists mainly of offices in the southern part,
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an entrance and reception occupy the northern area. A main road surrounds the large compass. On the left side, there are two small buildings, namely parking and storage,
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the factory centre is located in the corner of
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side. In the future, offices in the south are projected to be replaced by parking garages,
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the reception field will be conducted with 3 blocks of 2-bedroom houses with their communal gardens. On the west side, two small facilities will be turned into a larger residential block. By the plan, the factory will be replaced by an apartment block
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the parking area is going to be located in the eastern part.
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, the main road will remain unchanged.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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