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The chart below shows the percentages of different types of household waste that were recycled in one city between 1992 and 2002.

The chart below shows the percentages of different types of household waste that were recycled in one city between 1992 and 2002.
The data below gives information about different types of household was spend recklessly that were recycled in one city in the
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year
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years
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 1992 and 2002.
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, perspective , it is apparent that
percentages
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the percentages
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 of
glass
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,
paper
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, and plastic recycling showed an upward trend over the surveyed period, with
glass
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 and
paper
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 experiencing the most noticeable growth.
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, the recycling rate of
glass
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 was consistently highest during the same period. In 1992, the
proporrtion
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proportion
 of cans reclaimed was highest, at just under one-fifth. The figures for
glass
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 and
paper
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 were lower, at around 16% and 15%, respectively.
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, the recycling of plastic accounted for the lowest proportion, at precisely 10%. Starting from the
year
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 1992 and 2002, the percentage of plastic recycled experienced a slight increase to about 12% before remaining stable in the
last
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year
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 of
period
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, remaining at its lowest rate of waste recycled. The
dat
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data
 on
paper
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 witnessed a significant increase to nearly 28% in the
year
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 1997,
then
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 increased to approximately
39 percent
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39%
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 in 2002.
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, the figure for
glass
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 witnessed
with
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the
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a
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similarity
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 surge, soaring to over one-third in 1997 before reaching its peak of just under 50%.
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, the proportion of Can recycling fluctuated marginally, rising to roughly 30
percent
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per cent
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 in the
last
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after
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year after
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 declining to 15% in the
year
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 1997.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words year, glass, paper with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 2 times.
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