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The charts below give information about workplace injuries in one country in 2018.

The charts below give information about workplace injuries in one country in 2018.
The bar chart shows the proportion of injured bodies in workplaces in one country in 2018.
Overall
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, the elderly population, who were injured in workshops, showed higher
results
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 compared to other
age
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 groups.
While
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 injuries among
adolescence
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adolescents
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 were high in mining and construction, and education and health , they showed the lowest percentage in leisure and hospitality, and manufacturing. In leisure and hospitality, the
figure
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 generally increased to about 10% with the increase in
age
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 groups. In manufacturing , the highest
figure
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 was among
medium
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middle-aged
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age
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 people (35%);
however
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, the adults who are 25-34 and elderly people showed the same
results
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 (25%).
In addition
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, the lowest
figure
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 occurred in
minority
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the minority
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, with only 15% , who were injured in manufacturing. Notably, the elderly people who are over 50-60 years old showed the greatest interest in education and health , with 40 per
cent
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. The youth
figure
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 was 5 per
cent
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 more than the
medium
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median
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age
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groups
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group
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 (25%).
Furthermore
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, the lowest
results
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 were 5 per
cent
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 among adults who are between 25 and 34 among all workplaces, not only in education and health. Among youths, the increase peaked at 40 per
cent
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, who were injured in mining and construction, and the
results
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 among
elderly
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the elderly
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society
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apply
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were 5 per
cent
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 less than youths. In the third place was the
amount
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number
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 of adults with 15 per
cent
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 , and the
minimal
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lowest
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 percentage was 10 % among the medium
age
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 group workers in mining and construction.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words results, age, figure, cent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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