The graph shows the number of teens ( 13-17 years) and adults ( 18 years and above) who attended the cinema in Singapore between 2000 and 2011. (Leyla)

The graph shows the number of teens ( 13-17 years) and adults ( 18 years and above) who attended the cinema in Singapore between 2000 and 2011. (Leyla)
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph shows the number of teens ( 13-17 years) and adults ( 18 years and above) who attended the cinema in Singapore between 2000 and 2011. (Leyla)
The line graph compares the percentage of people of different ages who visited the cinema in Singapore from 2000 to 2011.
Overall
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it is clear that
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the majority of the audience was comprised of youth from 15 to 24,
while
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the least interest was shown by adults who were 35 and over.
Moreover
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, it is obvious that the trends for cinema visitors were fluctuating. Looking at the line graph in detail, it is obvious that in 2000, watching movies in the cinema was more popular among youngsters between 15 and 24, at nearly 16%,
whereas
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mature spectators were less enrolled, at just over 0. It is worth noting that the number of attenders from 15 to 24 rose noticeably until 2004, followed by intense fluctuations until 2011, to reach just over 50% in 2011. Meanwhile, the older generation experienced a gradual increase, with a drop in 2008 and
finally
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reached a peak of roughly 12% in 2011. Focusing on underages up to 14 and the young population between 25 and 35, it can be seen that their tendencies were similar during the given time frame, accounting for about 4% and 16%, respectively. It should be noted that the figures have been converged a few times, at nearly 14% in 2005, and at approximately 32% in 2009.

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