Five months ago you started renting an apartment on a six month agreement. you wish to stay in the apartment for longer than 6 months, you originally agreed with the owner. Write a letter to the owner of the apartment. In your letter: How long do you want to rent the apartment for Explain why your plans have changed Tell the owner about a problem in the apartment

Dear Mr. Wells,

This

letter is to put forward my

request

for extending the rental agreement of

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apartment, 702, Asha Harmony, Ghansoli Road, Mumbai beyond 6 months. A

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12-month

extension on the current agreement is my

request

. The original 6-month agreement is expiring on 30 September 2024, I wish to continue here till 30 September 2025. I was under the assumption that my company would accept my relocation

request

to Bengaluru, India and I will be moving there by 1 October 2024.

However

, it seems that the organization has decided not to consider my

request

due to

certain dependencies I have in the project here.

As a result

, I will be staying in Mumbai for another year. Having stayed in the apartment for

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now, I believe it is in my best interest that I extend my accommodation here for another year. But, there are

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of issues with the apartment that I would like to bring your kind attention to before the document signature happens. The flat is subjected to frequent power cuts

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during the summer months from May till June.

This

has caused me great discomfort especially in the

last

2 months because of the

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of work I operated in. Without electricity, my internet access was compromised and it affected my assignments. Awaiting your earnest reply on

this

. Kind regards, Nilesh Majumdar