This graph shows the proportion of four different materials that were recucled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, making comparisons where relevant.

This graph shows the proportion of four different materials that were recucled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, making comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for This graph shows the proportion of four different materials that were recucled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, making comparisons where relevant.
The line graph given illustrates the changes in recycling rate for four selected materials in the period
of
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from
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1982 and 2010 in different countries.
Overall
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, the paper & cardboard and glass containers have experienced a slight fluctuation,
while
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aluminium cans and plastics
were
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have been
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constantly rising. In 1982, the paper & cardboard materials had the highest percentage of recycling, amounting to about 65%.
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, after a peak in
1994
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1994,
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this
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trend saw a steady decline,
which reached
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reaching
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a
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apply
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70% by the end of the period. The glass containers were in second place
of
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in
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recycling
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the recycling
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rate, having 50% at the start of
this
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timeline. By 1994, the proportion was
also
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peaking, but from that time there was an upward trend and
made
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reached
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60% in 2010.
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, only in 1986
the
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recycling of aluminium cans
had started
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start
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and
had
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apply
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sharply
been went up
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increase
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throughout the period. Plastics were included in the proportion in 1990 and accounted for only 1%, but they climbed steadily to under 10% by 2010.

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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • recycled
  • materials
  • increased
  • paper and cardboard
  • plastic
  • glass
  • metal
  • significant increase
  • relatively stable
  • fluctuating
  • period
  • starting
  • reaching
  • gradually increasing
  • remained low
  • experienced
  • showed
  • greatest
  • proportion
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