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Nuclear energy is increasingly used as an alternative to fossil fuels in many countries. Some people believe that nuclear energy has more advantages than disadvantages. Others argue that its risks outweigh the benefits. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, nuclear
energy
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 has gained remarkable popularity
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 technological improvements. It is used by many countries
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 as the USA, China, and the UK.
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, nuclear
energy
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 has spread rapidly all around the world.
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, it has sparked many debates in the world. Some people believe that it will be a viable solution for countries,
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 others consider that it can be risky
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 its potentially damaging nature. Nuclear
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 provides considerable advantages in terms of renewable
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 and a decrease in CO2 emissions. One major benefit is that nuclear
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 is being renewable
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 source. Nuclear
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 is a form of renewable
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, thereby providing environmental protection.
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, it prevents the dying of forests or animals when plants are exploited.
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, nuclear
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 has provided a decrease in harmful gas emissions, especially CO2. In
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 way, it prevents global warming and ensures the World is livable.
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 there are numerous benefits of nuclear
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, there are
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 several drawbacks. The first disadvantage is that it poses a great safety risk. Provided that the nuclear
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 plants are exploited, they cause enormous damage. These explosions affect the environmental balance.
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, the number of disabled people is increasing, or some animal species may be endangered.
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, experts claim that the use of Nuclear
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 is hazardous for us 

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, some people deem that Nuclear
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 has disadvantages in terms of safety risks and explosions,
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 others claim that Nuclear
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 has benefits in terms of being beneficial for nature and protecting the atmosphere. It is my opinion that Nuclear
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 will be a useful technique for producing
energy
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. But some measures should be taken against the explosion of plants.

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content
Check the facts first. Nuclear energy is not a renewable energy source. fix this in the essay.
development
Give ideas with real, simple examples. This helps show points more clear.
language
Use short, easy words and short sentences. This makes the read easier.
coherence
Use better links between ideas. Try to put one main idea in each sentence.
structure
Have a clear view in the last part. State your own view plainly.
structure
The essay has a plan with an intro, body and end.
language
There are link words such as However and Secondly.

Your opinion

Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.

If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.

Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:

...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

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