The chart below shows the oercantage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Whales between 1918 and 2011.

The chart below shows the oercantage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Whales between 1918 and 2011.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows the oercantage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Whales between 1918 and 2011.
This
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chart illustrates the changes in the percentage of families
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who had their own houses or lived in rented accommodations in the United Kingdom and Wales during the 93 years before 2011.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the trend of
having owned
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homes was upward in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011.
In contrast
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, the percentage of households with rented accommodation decreased during that period. Living in
rented
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house was reported to be very common among people there. It was almost 80% in 1918.
Then
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, it depicts a significant decrease to reach about a third in 2001. After that, it was noted to increase to more than 30%
at the end
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of 2011.
On the other hand
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, having owned houses was around a fourth in 1918. It shows a sharp growth and it had reached
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less than 70% in 2001.
Finally
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, it fell to 65%in 2011.
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, the number of households with rented and owned
house
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was equal a half in 1971. All in all,
it is clear that
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most of the population tended to live in their own house during the 9 decades before 2011

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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
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