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THE BAR CHART SHOWS THE AMOUNT OF TEA AND COFFEE IMPORTED BY FOUR DIFFERENT COUNTRIES IN TONNES

THE BAR CHART SHOWS THE AMOUNT OF TEA AND COFFEE IMPORTED BY FOUR DIFFERENT COUNTRIES IN TONNES
The given
br
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bar
 chart illustrates the number of
tea
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 and
coffee
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 imported by four different
countries
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countries,
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 measured in tonnes.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the
tea
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 figure rose significantly in the UK among all countries,
whereas
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 the number of
coffee
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 reached in Germany by nearly
a
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apply
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half
compard
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compared
 with
tea
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.
However
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, the
others
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other
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 nationalities experienced a noticeable
supirior
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superiority
 in
coffee
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 consumption.
According to
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 the chart, the tonnes of imported
tea
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was
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were
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 the greatest over
patterns by
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the past
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 80000.
In contrast
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, the peak of
coffee
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figure
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consumption was
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 witnessed in Germany

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 78%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tea, coffee with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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