The diagram shows the process by which milk and related products are produced.

The diagram shows the process by which milk and related products are produced.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram shows the process by which milk and related products are produced.
The picture illustrates the steps and equipment involved in the process of manufacturing
milk
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and dairy products for commercial sale.
Overall
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, the process has multiple
different
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stages , starting from cows grazing and ending with selling in the supermarket and shops. Look at the first step, cows were grazed every day , and they were milked by machines twice a day.
Then
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, the amount of
milk
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was taken to the refrigerated storage. After that, the
milk
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obtained
,
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would be delivered to the Dairy by the large
milk
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tanker.
Next,
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the
milk
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was used for producing cheese, cream, and butter , and the amount of
milk
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remaining was pasteurised and packaged to sell in the market.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words milk with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • milking machines
  • containers
  • refrigerated trucks
  • pasteurization
  • homogenization
  • separation
  • standardization
  • cream
  • skim milk
  • fat content
  • packaging
  • cartons
  • bottles
  • dairy processing plant
  • quality control
  • safety and quality standards
  • distribution
  • retailers
  • grocery stores
  • vendors
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