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The map shows the plan for a new factory complex and housing area for employees. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map shows the plan for a new factory complex and housing area for employees. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The map below depicts the blueprint for a new industrial complex and accommodation area for workers.
Overall
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, the complex's industrial zones are found in the centre and southeast, with worker housing areas occupying the other portions.
In addition
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, there are several important public facilities carefully distributed around the place to conveniently serve the workers. In detail, in the northwest, there are buildings for workers' accommodation, a parking lot south of it, and an office near the centre of the industrial complex.
In contrast
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, the opposite housing area, in the northwest of the manufacturing complex, has a swimming pool exclusively designed for its residents and nearby families alike. The southwest side is primarily residential, with several houses near the outer edge of the site. Meanwhile, the southeast section is more
work-orientated
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, featuring a meeting room close to the central hub and a separate industrial zone located just beyond the ring road.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • factory complex
  • housing area
  • infrastructure
  • transportation links
  • amenities
  • environmental sustainability
  • residential buildings
  • communal facilities
  • work-life balance
  • industrial development
  • urban planning
  • green spaces
  • employee accommodation
  • accessibility
  • layout
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