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The graph below shows the un employment rates in the US and japan between March 1993 and march 1999. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below

The graph below shows the un employment rates in the US and japan between March 1993 and march 1999. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below
The graph illustration compares the unemployment
rates
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 in march of the
year
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 1993 to 1999, in the US, and
Japan
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 .
While
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Japan
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 continued to escalate it's work force, the US endured an erratic journey of high unemployment
rates
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.
Overall
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, the US during the
year
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 1993 encounted of 7
million
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employment
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 work force
rates
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.
However
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, the US consistently faced a linear drop till march of 1999, where the US
employment
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rates
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 dropped by 3
million
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.
On the contrary
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, the US
along with
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Japan
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 reached the same amount of
employment
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rates
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 by mid-
year
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 of march 1998, with an estimated 4.5
million
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employment
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 rate.
Nevertheless
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,
Japan
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 has escalated it's
employment
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rates
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 from the
year
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 1993.
In addition
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,
Japan
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 in 1993 had 2
million
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employment
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rates
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.
However
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,
this
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 escalated dramatically to an average of 4.7
million
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 employement
rates
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 by the
year
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 1999.
Thus
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,
Japan
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 surpasses the US significantly in it's
employment
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rates
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.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words rates, year, japan, million, employment with synonyms.
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