Write a letter to your friend, who is also a member of the club. Write about your feelings and what you think the club management should do about the situation. Write about 50 words.

Dear my friend Sardor. Did you see the message from the fitness club? They are closing for a month. Honestly, I am not very happy to hear

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news, because

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fitness club became my second home,

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and I

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really liked to train there with you. What about

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apply

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to continue

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continuing

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our training outside, like

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going

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for a jog or something along

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road

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What do you think about that? See you soon Mirziyod

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Aug 25, 2025

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task response

Add a clear plan from the club. Say what they will do and when.

coherence

Use one idea in each small part. Try to put ideas in new lines or sentences.

single idea per paragraph

Keep one idea per paragraph. Do not mix many ideas in one block.

tone

Keep a warm and easy talk with a friend.

content

The writer shows how they feel about the news.

tone

The tone is kind and friendly.

presentation

There is a greeting and a closing line.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

72 words

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Write a letter to your friend, who is also a member of the club. Write about your feelings and what you think the club management should do about the situation. Write about 50 words.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

It is more important to spend public money on promoting a healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness than to spend it on treatment of people who are already ill. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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