The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005.

The chart compares international tourist numbers by region in four years between 1990 and 2005.

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, worldwide travel rate

raised

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rose

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notifably

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noticeably

trough

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through

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fivteen

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fifteen

years,

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the pace of rise slowed after 1995. Europe prevailed by far the largest destination, but its dominance narrowed,

while

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Asia and the Pacific experienced the most rapid expansion.

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, the Americas levelled off after 2000, and Africa and the Middle East, though small in absolute numbers, increased steadily. Total arrivals increased from 448.9 to 693.7, and

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the gain

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of approximately 245. The upward trend was strongest in the first half of the period

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166 between 1990 and 1995, before easing to plus 54 by 2000 and only +24.5

thereafter

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. Europe rose from 280.2 to 400.2, retaining the top position;

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, its share slipped from about 62% to 58%. Asia and the Pacific more than doubled, jumping from 60.2 in 1990 to 135.8 in 2005—an increase that lifted its global share from roughly 13% to nearly one-fifth. The Americas rose from 80.5 to 118.2 by 2000 but

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slightly

droped

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dropped

to 113.2 in 2005. Africa and the Middle East showed a gradual but consistent increment, from 18.2 to 28.7 and from 9.8 to 15.8, respectively. In sum, international travel expanded substantially, with Asia–Pacific emerging as the key growth engine

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Europe remained the principal destination.

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