The graphs below show the size of the ozone hole over Antarctica and the production of three ozone-damaging gases from 1980 to 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs below show the size of the ozone hole over Antarctica and the production of three ozone-damaging gases from 1980 to 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graphs below show the size of the ozone hole over Antarctica and the production of three ozone-damaging gases from 1980 to 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The two-line graphs illustrate the change in the
ozone
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hole size over the
Antarctica
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Antarctic
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region from 1980 to 2000, and the amount of three gases produced
which
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caused damage to the
ozone
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layer during the same period.
Overall
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, the
ozone
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hole size around 400 thousand square Km in 1980 saw and steady increase and
reaching
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its ninefold at around 3.6
million
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in the early 21st century.
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, the only decrease over the two decades is in
early
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the early
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1990s, dropping from 2
million
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square Km to 1.2
million
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square Km. Turning to the next graphs, CFC-11,
for example
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,
remain
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unchanged for 2 years at around 70
million
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tonnes
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,
then
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continued to drop and vanished in the year 2000. CFC-12, starting from 28
million
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tonnes
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in 1980, increased steadily to around 40
million
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tonnes
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over the twenty years.
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, N2O
is
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did
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not
started
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start
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damaging the
ozone
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layer until 1990,
has
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and has
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rose up
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risen
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dramatically to 30
million
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tonnes
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in 10 years. In summary, the peak of
ozone
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hole size over Antarctica is 3.6
million
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tonnes
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,
whereas
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CFC-12 and N2O
has
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have
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become the major impact which
damaging
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damages
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the
ozone
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layer.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 69%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words ozone, million, tonnes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graphs" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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