The diagram details the process of making leather products. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feather, and make conparison where relevant.

The diagram details the process of making leather products. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feather, and make conparison where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram details the process of making leather products. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feather, and make conparison where relevant.
The flow chart shows the
process
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of making leather products from drying animal
skin
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, transportation to
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factory
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the factory
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, washing, soaking, flattening and polishing the animal
skin
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.
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, the main material used in processing is animal
skin
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and water. The
process
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begins with drying the animal
skin
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,
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then
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and then
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after transported to the
factory
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. It is at the
factory
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that water and lime
is
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are
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used to wash the animal
skin
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, and
then
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followed by soaking the animal
skin
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in lime.
Thereafter
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, the animal
skin
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is flattened by flattening machinery,
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soaked again
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this
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time in water and
tanin
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tannin
vegetable matter. Once that
process
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is completed, the animal
skin
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is polished using polishing material. Upon completion, the next
process
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is to transport the animal
skin
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to the next
factory
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.It is at
this
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factory
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that
will
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apply
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then
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the
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produce
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apply
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end products
such
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as bags, shoes and basketballs.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words process, skin, factory with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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