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The bar chart below shows the hours per week that teenagers apend doing certain activities in Chester from 2002 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the hours per week that teenagers apend doing certain activities in Chester from 2002 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
The given bar chart compares the activities that the teenagers spend
hours
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 per week in Chester between 2002 and 2007.
Overall
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, it is obvious that
while
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 teenagers have spent most of their time watching TV shows and DVDs throughout the given period, bowling was the least favourite activity among youngsters.
To begin
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 with, from 2002 to 2004, the number of
hours
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 spent going to discos per week slightly increased. Later, in continuing years, it remained at around 12
hours
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 and significantly rose to 18
hours
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 in 2007. The number of
hours
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 that the young population have spent watching TV has increased by 5
hours
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 each year and climbed from 25
hours
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 to nearly 40,
whereas
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 watching DVDs was not as popular as watching TV; despite a gradual increase in 2004 (18
hours
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),
this
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 figure experienced a dramatic decline to 10
hours
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.
In contrast
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, the least favourable activities in the given period were shopping, which showed a steady increase from 7
hours
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 to 15 , but doing homework,
together with
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 doing sport, bucked the trend and showed a modest downward trend to 7 and 2
hours
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 per week, respectively. The bowling activity has not changed over time and has remained at the bottom with some fluctuations.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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