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The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their ann income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information oy selecting and reporting the main features make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their ann income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information oy selecting and reporting the main features make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart, compares the amount of households in the US by their annual
income
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 over a given
period
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. the rate of lower
income
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 individuals didn't change significantly during the
period
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,
however
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 most of the catgories didn't change much as well. It is
also
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 clear that the
number
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 of householders didn't change a lot for the people with intermediate
income
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. Notably,
house
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 owners with less than 25000 as their
income
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 showed fluctation in the given
period
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 they went up from 25
million
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 in 2007 owened
house
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, to almost 30
million
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 in 2011 and
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 showed an decrese of approximatelly 2
million
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. the
number
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 of
house
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 owners with
income
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 of 25000 to 49999 showed the same trend, as their amount went up from around 27
million
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 to 29 milllion and
then
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 decreased to about 28
million
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. the individuals how earned 50000 to 74999 annually stayed the same over the given
period
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 with a
number
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 of 22
million
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house
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 oweners. People who earned more than 100000 annually own large
number
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 of real astate, and it is shown in the graph that their
number
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 was around 29
million
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 in 2007 and
then
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 it went down to 27
million
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 in 2011
then
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 it elvated once again to a peak of 33
million
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 2011.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words income, period, number, house, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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