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The chart below shows the precentage of different types of household waste that were recycled in one city between 1992 and 2002.

The chart below shows the precentage of different types of household waste that were recycled in one city between 1992 and 2002.
The chart compares
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 how much refuse was reclaimed in the city from 1993 to 2002.
Overall
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, the garbage of paper,
glass
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 and plastic increased.
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 cans decreased. In terms of waste materials of paper, via inhabitants was
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 14% in 1992. Year by year it rose considerably to 39% in 2002%. Regarding the 14% trash of
glass
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 that was sent for recycling in 1992. Afterwards, residents took out the 49% debris of
glass
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.
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, the reprocessing of
glass
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 increased quickly in 2002. Turning to plastic began at 10% in 1992. Noticed
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 a slow growth to 13% in 1997. There was a levelling
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 at 13% until 2002.
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 was 18% in 1992. After that, there followed a small fall to 13% in 1997. There was a substantial climb to 14% in 2002.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words glass with synonyms.
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