Write a letter to the transport officer about a problem with the system in your area please say Describe the situation you are facing  why do you consider considerate a problem? What changes would you like to recommend?

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
inform
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you about an issue with bus transportation, and would like to propose some
potencial
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potential
solutions. I am Rushabh Patel, and reside
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33 Almayo
cresent
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Crescent
. Recently, I have
an
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experinced singnificant
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experienced significant
delays in the arrival of city buses at bus stops. As a frequent user of city
transporation
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transportation
to
daily
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commute to work
,
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daily, made
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made
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it made
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it extremely difficult to reach on
a
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time because of
uncertain
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the uncertain
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schedule of buses.
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delays
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is
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not only
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me but
also
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impacts local residents. As
result
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a result
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, a lot of workers get a warning letter from
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their employee
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employee
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about punctuality.
This
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is evident that
this
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problem needs an urgent solution. I would like to suggest that
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you immediately
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appoint an officer to investigate
problem
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the problem
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throughly
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thoroughly
and
should
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take
an
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action to
reach
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ensure
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buses
on
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arrive on
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time. Your faithfully, Rushabh Patel

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task response
Task Response: The letter states the issue and gives a plan, but it lacks many facts and a clear main request. Add precise dates, places, and a clear ask.
coherence
Coherence: The ideas jump. Use one idea per paragraph and link phrases to move from problem to impact to fix.
greeting closing
Greeting and Closing: You have 'Dear Sir/Madam' and a closing, but the closing should be 'Yours faithfully,' and the address line can be cleaned.
paragraphing
Single Idea Per Paragraph: Put each point in its own paragraph: 1) the problem, 2) effects, 3) what you want done.
task completion
Complete Response: State who should act, what actions, and by when. Add contact details.
tone
Tone: Keep formal, and fix spelling. Use clear, polite form.
format
Polite opening and closing.
content
States the issue and its effect.
content
Requests action to fix the issue.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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