The chart below shows the number of people employed in five types of work in one region of Australia in 2001 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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of employees that been hired in various types of jobs in the continent of Australia in 2001 and 2008.

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, the majority of people that been hired in different types of work have increased significantly from 2001 to 2008. Sales has the highest rate of employment in both periods,

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farming displays a slight decrease in hiring for the job. In 2001, there was a dramatic rise in sales hiring from almost 150000 to 160000, by approximately 100000 over seven years.

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computing came in second place with a dramatic rise from 50000 to nearly 70000. In 2008, farming showed a significant decrease in employment from 30000 to 19000 approximately , with a rate of decline in hiring

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11000.