The graph shows the Village of Chorleywood showing development between 1868 and 1994.

The map illustrates two possible locations for a new planned

supermarket

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in Garldson

town

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Overall

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, the second

supermarket

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will be clearly accessible to more citizens and transportation will pass across it,

whereas

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supermarket

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one will be far away from the centre of the

town

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and might serve less of the population. Regarding the initial mart, it will be located in the countryside, far away from a lot of population, and it is out of the housing and downtown area. The

supermarket

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will have limited accessibility. Though it will be far, there will still be a railway and one main lane crossing near it. It is noticeable that

this

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supermarket

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will only serve the Hindon community and those who will take the train.

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the second mart, it will be located between two industrial sectors, particularly in the downtown centre, where there will be no traffic roads.

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, a railway will cross through the

town

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near the

supermarket

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, a main road at the eastern border of the

town

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will expand to 25 km to the Crandson population, who is exactly 29,000.

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, a second main lane on the western border of the

town

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will extend to 16 km, reaching the Brandson citizens, who are over 15,000.

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, another main road will pass at the North edge of the Garldson

town

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centre, the road will extend to 12 km reaching the Hindson society.

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