The pie charts show the results of a survey conducted by a university on the opinions of full-time and part-time students about its services.

The pie charts show the results of a survey conducted by a university on the opinions of full-time and part-time students about its services.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The pie charts show the results of a survey conducted by a university on the opinions of full-time and part-time students about its services.
The pie graphs illustrate the research about how full-time and part-time
students
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feel about IT services and the time of current opening hours.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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all of them have a good emotion, which is the highest result with opening hours,
while
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the help from staff in the IT shop
is observed
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shows
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the
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a
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significant difference between full-time and part-time
students
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. Regarding the IT support, the percentage of very happy
feeling
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feelings
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with full-time
students
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accounting for 54% with the highest sector.
Although
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15% and around one-third of not
good
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feel good
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feeling
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apply
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and
quite
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are quite
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happy from full-time
students
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respectively.
In contrast
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, only 20% of good emotions
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are
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witnessed the least
to
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in
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the entire sector
and
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, and
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the percentage of quite happy
just
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apply
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make
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makes
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up 35%. Around one half of
emotion
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the emotion
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sector
is
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does
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not feel good, so
this
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service should be improved. In terms of opening hours,
all
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almost all students
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students
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almost
feel
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are
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very happy with 87% and 72% from full-time and part-time
students
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respectively. The percentage of part-time
student’s
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students’
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emotions is quite happy at 23% higher than full-time
students
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at 12%.
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Moreover
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the low emotions of two types of
students
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are
lowest
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the lowest
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sectors with only 1% and 5%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words students with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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