The maps below show a bookstore in 2000 and now

The maps below show a bookstore in 2000 and now
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps below show a bookstore in 2000 and now
The maps below give information about bookstore has changed over the year 2000 and now.
Overall
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, there were almost no changes in the separate placements;
however
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, in the smallest options, there were the biggest changes ever. In 2000, the entrance was from the west side of the building, and inside the building on the north side, there was a
fiction
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placement , and nearby it was again. In the middle of the building, there was a Travel agency, and close to that were new books on the left side. On the corner of the map, there was a service desk which was essential for human beings, and close to non non-
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part of the map. There were three crucial options in the middle ,
such
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as it was Art, Hobbies, and the
last
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one Cookery. In present, almost everything has changed. The entrance stayed up without changes , and above the map, there was
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in previous time, and now it replaced the placements of the previous three stages : Art, Hobbies, Cookery, and
fiction
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. And nearby that was
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, and now it became a non-
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narrative. The fact that the three stages were in the middle of the centre, and now it is the placement of the Tobie. About other statements,
such
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as Travel agencies, New books, and service desks have not changed, by replacing the non-
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option below, it has now become a cafe
which
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, which
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is necessary for residents.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "such".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words fiction with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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