The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

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The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
The two maps show the layout of an
island
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in 1980 and the current changes after reconstruction.
Overall
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, the western
side
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remained intact,
while
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the eastern
side
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had significant changes with new facilities. An
island
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consists of a reception in the center and there is a restaurant to the rear with accommodations on each
side
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. Access to the
island
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was from the pier. On the western
side
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had a beach where tourists can swim and a lot of accommodations for living. Following the renovations, only the western
side
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remains the same. The shops and restaurants in the
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area
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, which were previously occupied by a restaurant. A pool was built, which resulted in the disappearance of the accommodations. New facilities have been introduced on the eastern part of the
island
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,
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these include the modern blocks of apartments,
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a diving school near the surf beach.
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new boardwalk was introduced, which linked from the pier to the surf beach, that located on the east
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of the
island
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.

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words island, side with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • island
  • before and after
  • construction
  • tourist facilities
  • maps
  • changes
  • comparison
  • description
  • implications
  • personal opinion
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