The diagram illustrates the step-by-step process involved in making ethanol for the production of biofuel.

The diagram illustrates the step-by-step process involved in making ethanol for the production of biofuel.
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The diagram illustrates the step-by-step process involved in making
ethanol
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for the production of biofuel.
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, there are eight consecutive steps. The process starts with harvesting plants and trees, which are
then
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converted into finer particles, and
lastly
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producing
ethanol
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to use as vehicle fuel. In the first stage, plants and trees grow by absorbing carbon dioxide and sunlight; they are harvested by farmers. In the next step, these raw materials are collected and processed into smaller particles using a grinder machine. These smaller particles are
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sent to the labs
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chemicals are added to break down the cells.
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, the chemical formula is extracted sugars and microbes are
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added to the mixture, which produces
ethanol
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. The
ethanol
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is produced to be used as fuel for vehicles
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as cars,
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aeroplanes
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, and trucks.
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, the carbon dioxide emitted during combustion is absorbed again by plants, completing the cycle.

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