Dear Angela,
How are you doing? I hope you are doing well. I am writing to you
this
letter in regards to a family party.Linking Words
Write a letter to your close friend inviting him/her to your family party. In your letter: explain why you are organizing the party describe what you are planning to do say how important it is to have your friend at the party.
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task response
Task response needs more parts. Add why the party is held, what you will do, and why your friend is important.
coherence
Coherence: use a clear order. A short opening, then a reason, a plan, and a close.
greeting
Greeting and closing: use a clear end, like 'Best wishes,' and your name.
paragraphing
Keep one main idea in each paragraph. If you add more ideas, start a new paragraph.
task response
Complete response: tell why, what you plan, and why the friend matters to you.
tone
Tone: keep a warm and friendly feel. Use small, kind words.
greeting
Polite start with 'Dear Angela' is good.
purpose
The goal of the party is stated.
tone
The note is friendly in feel.
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.
‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.
Examples:
I really want to study but I’m too tired.
I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.
If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.