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THE TABLE BELOW GIVES INFROMATION ABOUT CONSUMER SPENDING ON DIFFERENT ITEMS IN FIVE DIFFERENT COUNTRIES IN 2002

THE TABLE BELOW GIVES INFROMATION ABOUT CONSUMER SPENDING ON DIFFERENT ITEMS IN FIVE DIFFERENT COUNTRIES IN 2002
The provided graph illustrates statistics about how much people spend on different items in
Ireland
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, Italy,
Spain
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, Sweden, and
Turkey
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 in 2002.
Overall
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, in 2002,
Turkey
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 and
Ireland
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 witnessed the highest share of all the different items, overtaking the others.
By contrast
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,
Spain
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, Sweden, and Italy were the lowest comparatively.
Turkey
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 had the highest percentage of refreshments and a methamphetamine material, nearly a third in 2002,
while
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Ireland
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 had almost 28% of the same category. More citizens in
Turkey
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 spend less time in education, double what it was in
Ireland
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.
Turkey
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 and
Ireland
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 spend much money when shopping with a tiny fraction. Italy, Sweden, and
Spain
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 experienced the same share of refreshments and a methamphetamine material; meanwhile, those nations allocate less time to studying, but
Spain
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 had the lowest share with around 2% in 2002, with an insignificant minority compared with the other elements.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words ireland, spain, turkey with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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