The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

This

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graph illustrates the

number

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of two different

visitors

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of a specific Caribbean

island

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who stayed on the

island

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and on

cruise

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ships

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from 2010

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to

2017.

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, it can be seen that the total

number

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of tourists displays a significant growth.

Likewise

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, there was an

increase

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trend in staying on the

island

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and on

cruise

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ships

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. In the first year, there

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0.3

million

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people who

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their trip on

cruise

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ships

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.

Next,

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it was recorded a small rise

in

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their

number

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.

Then

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, in the following year, they decreased to reach the first level.

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, the

number

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of tourists who decided to stay on

cruise

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ships

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in the

last

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five years rose to 2

million

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.

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, the

number

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of tourists staying on the

island

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was noted a

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. In the first year, it remained stable

and

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it was about 0.8

million

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.

Furthermore

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, it grew until 2013.

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, their figures remained unchanged for

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the next

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two years.

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,

whereas

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they dropped to 1.25

million

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in 2016, they rocketed dramatically to 1.5

million

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. All in all,

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two groups of

visitors

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depict an upward trend.

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,

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their total

number

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tripled during those seven years, the

number

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of

visitors

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staying on

cruise

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ships

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was more than

visitors

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staying on the

island

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.