You are going on a month training program to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social events’ organizer. Write a letter to the Training Organiser • Express your interest in the role • Request more information about it • Explain what experience you have
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing in regard to expressing my interest in the social event organizer for the training program which be held in the UK. I am M. Ka one of the participants and I have a passion for
this
position. I believe I am a qualified candidate since I have strong credentials and some experiences that suit the needs of this
position.
To explain more detail, I hold a bachelor’s degree in management. Furthermore
, I have participated in some communication skills, time management and other soft-skill workshops. I am a diligent person and work to deadlines.
In addition
, I have more experience with regard to this
position. I was a social organizer for an international seminar that was held in our university and I was responsible for managing supervisors, timetables and guest accommodations. In addition
, nowadays I manage a scientific group about a chemistry book review and different articles for journals.
Should you need to call via phone. I can be reached on 0912. I look forward to receiving your reply.
Yours faithfully,
M.karSubmitted by kargar.mh1992 on
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logical structure
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single idea per paragraph
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suitable writing tone
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complete response
The letter expresses the writer's interest clearly and addresses all required points from the prompt.
single idea per paragraph
Effective paragraphs close to single ideas, making it easy to follow the writer's train of thought.
greeting and closing
The greeting and closing are appropriately formal for this context.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
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- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
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