Some people say that now we can see films on our own phones and tablets there is no need to visit cinema and others say that to be fully enjoyed films need to be seen in a cinema if one wants to enjoy completely. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

With the advent of new technologies, our lives have changed significantly
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our access to recreation
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the way we watch
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Nowadays
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Nowadays,
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people tend to watch
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on their portable
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like phones and tablets
instead
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of going to the movie
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essay will try to
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shed
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light
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both the ways of watching
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and will try to draw a conclusion. First of all, it's undeniable that watching
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on
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portable
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worth of time and place
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, and
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this
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also
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grant
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freedom. Definitely, one can watch
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at any time and place
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, preferable
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preferable
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, if a person wants to watch
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at
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the morning
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sitting on the toilet, certainly it's possible.
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, enjoying
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on portable
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allow
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allows
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great freedom to choose from a large list of
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starting
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from the
classics
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movies
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to those released recently.
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,
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help
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us to pass out our time with great amusement rather than succumbing to the gruesomeness of solitude.
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, watching
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on
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the
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actually
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grants
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us some worthy experiences. It's undeniable that
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apply
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the charm and essence of
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can only be
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obtained
by watching
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on the big
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and
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this
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is where the small
screens
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of portable
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fail.
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, watching a 3D movie on a big 3D screen is a lively experience, which smaller
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will always fail to provide.
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, it's a way
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new social bonds and make the existing
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ones
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stronger because in general, people have the tendency to watch
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in groups.
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, it's obvious that watching
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on smaller
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are
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handy, useful and easily accessible
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, but
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watching
in
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big
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are
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is
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the real way to get
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oneself
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enchanted. It's undeniable
newer
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that newer
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technologies always lure us to watch
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on mobiles and
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tablets
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but
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, but
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for an engmatic
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it's pertinent to watch
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in
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