The graph below gives information on wages of Somecountry over a ten-year period. Write a report for a university tutor describing the information shown.

The line graph displays statistics on

wages

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of

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a

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different

part

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parts

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of the world between 1993 and 2003.

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, a significant rise in the

precentage

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percentage

of

employers

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employers'

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wages

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in the middle of 1998 and 1999,overtaking all the other

fare

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fares

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.

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by

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contrast, the lowest was between 2002 and 2003,

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the average fluctuated from the

half

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middle

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of 1998 to the entire period. In 1993, it started with around 2% and experienced a gradual

rose

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rise

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with

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to

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almost

a

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double.

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the most share of

wages

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was in between 1998 and 1999, triple what it was in 1993, which makes it the highest value over the whole period. In the

half

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second half

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of 1994, the accounted value witnessed a steady

declined

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with approximately 3%.

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in the middle of 98s, the evolution in average

wages

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dropped dramatically

to

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for

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the rest of the years.