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Humans are producing an increasing amount of trash everyday and the world is becoming full of the landfills we use to get rid of our trash. In your opinion, how can recycling save the environment and help the people on Earth?

In recent years, humans have been generating waste more than ever before, and landfills have been accumulating worldwide.
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 some argue that an effective solution does not exist, I believe that recycling can help tackle the issue and protect both the environment and human life.
To begin
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 with, recycling has numerous advantages in terms of improving life quality. When humans discard plastic and other waste materials,
this
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 trash is most likely to enter the human system through fish and drinking water, which can lead to long-term chronic diseases.
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, a 2023 study in the United States found that microplastic particles were present in human bodies, particularly in the blood and lungs, which raised concerns about long-term health risks.
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, if people dispose of trash without considering reusing it, the negative impacts will eventually return to them.
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, biodiversity and ecosystems can be preserved by adopting recycling rather than disposing of garbage carelessly. An abundance of trash can threaten marine and terrestrial animals,
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 as turtles, seabirds, and camels, as they often mistake plastic for food, leading them to suffer injury, suffocation, or even death.
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, when individuals take the initiative to process their own waste, they reduce the demand for raw material, leading to fewer forests being destroyed by logging.
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, the Swedish government has enacted laws requiring residents to use eco-friendly products, including reusable plastic items, biodegradable packaging, and separate bins, which encourage individuals to adopt more sustainable lifestyles.
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although
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 some may claim that reducing rubbish is not important, I am convinced that people can not only protect ecosystems but
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 improve their
overall
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 well-being.

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task response
Add more easy ideas on how recycling saves energy, reduces waste, and gives new work. Give simple steps people can take at home.
coherence
Keep each paragraph about one main idea. Use clear links to move from one sentence to the next. Try to use new but simple link words.
content
The view is clear and the task is answered.
content
Good use of examples like microplastics and laws in Sweden.
form
The text has a good form: intro, 2 body parts, and a close.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • recycle
  • recycling
  • reduce
  • reuse
  • waste
  • trash
  • landfill
  • pollution
  • pollute
  • energy
  • save
  • emissions
  • greenhouse gases
  • resources
  • paper
  • plastic
  • metal
  • glass
  • curbside
  • bin
  • sorting
  • recyclable
  • non-recyclable
  • compost
  • environment
  • health
  • jobs
  • money
  • city
  • community
  • policy
  • law
  • plan
  • awareness
  • practice
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