The two maps show the library both now and in the past.

The two maps show the library both now and in the past.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The two maps show the library both now and in the past.
The given maps depict how the
library
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has changed over the past 20 years.
Overall
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,
although
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the general layout of the
library
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has remained the same, several new facilities have been introduced in order to provide students with greater comfort and better study conditions.
It is clear that
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all rooms in the
library
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have been renovated.
For example
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, the room for CDs, videos and computer games was replaced with a Storytelling events room.
In addition
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, the Children's books section was converted into a new lecture room and a computer area was introduced
instead
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of a reading place throughout the period.
Moreover
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, the adult fiction books
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were place
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place
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in the
library
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was changed into
all
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apply
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reference books area. Obviously, the most significant modification is the addition of a café, as there was no
such
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facility 20 years ago. To provide visitors with more comfort, the management introduced a café where students can relax
while
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studying.
Furthermore
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, some tables and chairs were removed in order to enlarge the corridor.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words library with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "provide" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
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