The line graph compares four
various
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apply
age
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groups
in terms of went to the athletic club once a month or more from 1990 to 2010.
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Overall
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the
all Correct article usage
apply
age
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groups
started almost at the same point and experienced consistent increases in the Use synonyms
twenty year
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twenty-year
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addition
the percentage of younger Add a comma
addition,
groups
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were
higher compared to Correct subject-verb agreement
was
medium
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middle-aged
age
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groups
.
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First,
the group of youths started at 10% in 1990 , and it peaked at 60% in 2006, which remained unchanged until 2010. Meanwhile , in the group Linking Words
adults
who are between 25-Change preposition
of adults
34
there is a rapid increase, starting at around 10% in 2010 and reaching 50% in 2010.
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34,
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medium
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middle-aged
age
people who are around 35-44 experienced Use synonyms
upward
trend, starting at 7% in 1990, Correct article usage
an upward
then
it rose gradually to approximately 20% in 2006, before witnessing rapid growth to 40% in 2010. Regarding the elderly people who are 45 years old showed the lowest results compared to other Linking Words
age
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groups
. Use synonyms
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instance
it started 5% in 1990 and increased only to 20% by growing gradually within 20 years.Add a comma
instance,