The maps below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today.

The maps below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today.
The maps compare the layout of the Grange
Park
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in 1920 with its current form.
Overall
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,
while
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the entrances remain in the same positions, the
park
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has undergone major transformations, with new modern facilities added and older features
such
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as the glasshouse and fountain removed. The stage for musicians on the western side has been replaced with a large amphitheatre for concerts. The rose garden in the northwest of the
park
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remains intact, but the two other gardens near the northern entrance and on the Eldon Street side have been removed. These were replaced by a square rose garden in the centre, located in the former fountain.
This
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square garden is surrounded by seating, which was previously distributed at the edges of the
park
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. In the northeast corner, a playground has been constructed adjacent to a newly built cafe. A water feature has
also
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been installed closer to the southern entrance where the glasshouse once stood.
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, a new entrance to an underground car
park
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has been introduced on the southeast edge.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words park with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • park
  • open
  • features
  • facilities
  • playground
  • café
  • walking paths
  • developed
  • space
  • sports
  • social activities
  • benches
  • picnic spots
  • comfortable
  • visitors
  • trees
  • grass
  • areas
  • addition
  • more
  • today
  • in
  • when
  • it
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