Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Recently, people were discussing

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whether the authority should pay more

money

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on

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railways

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than

roads

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. I strongly disagree with that. I am inclined to believe that

both

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railways

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and

roads

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are important infrastructures for cities.

First,

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railway and road hold the same importance in a

city

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’s economic and social development. In perspective of

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,

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both

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railway

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railways

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and

roads

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are

main

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the main

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transportations

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means

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of

traveling

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travelling

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and transacting.

Railways

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are mainly used between different cities

and

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roads

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are definitely the way people go through different places in a

city

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.

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, when goods are delivered from one

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to another, they are

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firstly

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be

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transferred by trains, which depend on

railways

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,

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then

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will be

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delivered by cars, which run on

roads

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.

Therefore

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,

railways

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and

roads

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are

both

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important for a

city

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’s development

,

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governments should invest

them

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in them

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similarly

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.

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if only spent

money

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on

railways

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, citizens’ satisfaction will decrease rapidly. If the quality of

roads

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is not good, there will

appear

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more traffic problems.

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, frequent traffic

jam

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will make employees’ commuting time much longer, which can highly decrease

city

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dwellers’ satisfaction. What’s more, traffic accidents could

also

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lead to security problems

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more citizens will feel disappointed by the low efficiency of transportation and high accident rate.

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, if governments only spend

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on

railways

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, there will be many safety problems and lower citizen satisfaction. In conclusion, governments should balance the

money

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they spend on

railways

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and

roads

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, because

both

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are significant

transportations

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for a

city

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, highly related to the development of economics and society. If

only

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focus on

railways

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, the

transporting

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transportation

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efficiency will

keep

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remain

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low.