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Band 1

In order to solve traffic problems, governments should tax private car owners heavily and use themoney to improve public transportation. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a solution?

These days
some
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goverments
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governments
 really want to
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 traffic problems , so there
are
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 a suggestion to obligate private car owners to
bay
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 tax ,
according to
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 the prime minister
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 the revenue will be a supporter to the economy
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essay
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 I will discuss with you how the
goverment
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government
 will apply the plan on
ground
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the ground
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advantages
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 plan became so popular
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therefore
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 I think it will reduce traffic
jam
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,
also
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 support the national economy ,
boost
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and boost
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update
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updates
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 in
Infrastcture
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infrastructure
.
in
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other
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 hand
disadvantages
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, disadvantages
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:
people
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 anger ,
decreasing
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 in some sectors
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, espicially
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espicially
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especially
 vital activities ,
errors
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and errors
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 in the movement of the economy.
in
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 conclusion ,
i
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I
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 wish these
disicions
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decisions
effect
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positevily
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positively
 on our
life
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, facilitate access to everything .

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task response
Plan before you write. Start with a short intro that says the topic and your view. Finish with a short conclusion.
coherence
Use clear links between ideas. Try words like first, next, but, because, so.
language
Use simple, correct sentences. Check spell and grammar.
structure
You show the idea of two sides.
content
There is a try to give the view and reason.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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