Consumers are faced with an increasing number of advertisements from competing companies. To what extent do you think consumers are influenced by advertisements? What measures can be taken to protect them?

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this

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day and age, whether we want it or not, we are constantly

bobared

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with advertisements in every occasion have

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media

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the media

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. Companies try to adopt competitive strategies to make more profits. I think there is no way for

people

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to not

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not to

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being

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be

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influenced by

ads

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, but there are some steps to be taken to mitigate

its

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their

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effects

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. It is evident that

growing

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a growing

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number of various

ads

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represent how much they have been able to influence

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people’

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people’s

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mindset. Two indicators that show the

effects

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of

ads

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are consumerism and

changing

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in

standard

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the standard

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of living.

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consumerism.

People

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in each situation of their daily routine activities

face

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with different

ads

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which can turn to

people

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’s needs.

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, even though

people

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mostly do not need them

but

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under the

effects

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of the

ads

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, purchase them, thereby regularly growing the consumerism

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.

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, these

ads

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have greatly transformed standards of living by creating unrealistic standards.

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, many

people

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consider the contents of

ads

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as a standard of their life and try their best to achieve

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the standard

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of beauty in recent years among youngsters

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changed

and

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they use many products which cost an arm and a leg, to become similar to those who perform those

ads

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.

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trend not only

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financially

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financial

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pressure on the young generation, but

also

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change

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changes

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their viewpoints towards

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the standard

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of living.

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, there are some approaches

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that can

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be adopted to mitigate the societal repercussions of

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contemporary

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. For one, the government have to monitor and constrain the

ads

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carefully, especially those which

targeting

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target

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teenagers and children. Take fast

foods

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food

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ads

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as an example. The increasing consumption of fast foods among teenagers would result in

high

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rate of

obesity

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obesity,

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that

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is a serious problem

and

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it can be controlled by the

governments

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actions.

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, schools and universities can take

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part

to

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in

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announce

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informing

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students to become aware of the hidden side

effects

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of

ads

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. If students know about the repercussions, they are less likely to be influenced by

ads

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while

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watching

cosmos

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ads

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.

Finally

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, it would be great if those companies

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more

ads

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on social media, they would be forced to pay more taxes.

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,

government

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the government

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and

educational

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the educational

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system can play a key role

to reduce

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in reducing

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the

effects

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of

ads

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.

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, undoubtedly, we cannot stay away from the

effects

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of

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on our lifestyle

but

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it

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we

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might

be

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apply

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mitigate the amount of their

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through educating

young

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the young

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generation and

exert

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exerting

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some constraints on companies.