The chart below shows the precentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.

The chart below shows the precentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows the precentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.
The bar chart demonstrates the
proportion
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of families who owned a property and the ratio of
house
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renting in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.
Overall
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, with a growth trend of
house
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owning during the period, there is
also
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a decline in
house
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renting. There are nearly 80% of families rented a
house
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in 1918 , but only over 30% of them still paid rent in 2011.
On the other hand
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, just over 20% of families bought a property for living in 1918,
while
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almost 100 years later, nearly 60% to 70% of households owned their houses in 2011. The ratio of renting declines gradually,
while
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the
proportion
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of owning increases steadily.
Moreover
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, in 1971, the
proportion
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of the two sides was equal, 50% on each side.
Then
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, both sides maintained their trends until 2001. After that, there is a slight increase in the ownership
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,
while
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the gradual fall ratio of
house
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owning
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ownership
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Vocabulary: Replace the words proportion, house with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increases" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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