Some people believe that government have a duty to ensure its citizens have a healthy diet, while others believe it is individuals’ responsibility to care their diet and heaths? Discuss both side and give your opinion

4.The author’s true conclusion was identifying a specific G protein that activates phospholipase C, which is a key cellular regulator.

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“PTX-insensitive G protein”, as the authors

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, “answers many of the questions about the regulation of

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enzyme.” They conclude that the αq subunit represents “a subpopulation in the larger family of the trimeric G proteins,” unique in structure and role. Most importantly, they show that “the α subunit of Gq appears to be sufficient to effect stimulation,” acting alone to drive

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physiological pathway.

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structure

Plan what you want to say first. Have a short start and end.

language

Use simple words. Try one main idea per sentence.

coherence

Link ideas with small join words like 'also', 'but', 'so'.

content

Give proof or examples to back your points.

content

The text shows a clear focus on a main idea about the G protein.

strength

Quotes are used to show evidence.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

86 words

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