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Writing Samples
Band 4

some people say it's a waste of time to plan for the future .We should live in the present.To what extent do you agree or disagree

There is always
a
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arugued opnion
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argued opinion
 about planning for the future, some people would say it is a waste of time, we should live in the present, and
the
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apply
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other would say planning for the future
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is for
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for the better
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better for the
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 forsee. For me,
It
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it
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 is
definetly
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definitely
waste
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a waste
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 of time planning for the future. I used to say that we do not know what tomorrow will be,
human
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humans
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is
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are
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 not that strong, maybe I will die
in
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apply
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the next day.

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task response
State your view clearly in the first sentence and keep a simple stance throughout the essay.
task response
Give two reasons to show your view and a short example to make them clear.
coherence cohesion
Plan your essay with four parts: introduction, two body parts, and a simple conclusion.
coherence cohesion
Use linking words like and, but, so to show how ideas go together.
accuracy
Check your spelling and grammar, e.g., 'argued' not 'arugued', 'definitely' not 'definetly'.
overall
You take a clear position on the topic.
structure
Short, simple sentences are easy to read.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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