Some people believe that men and women possess different skills. According to them certain jobs are more suitable for men than women. There are also some jobs where women perform better. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays,
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compete with
men
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in almost all
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sectors
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and have
also
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proven their mettle. When we talk about intellectual capabilities,
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and
women
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are considered equal
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however
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however,
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there are certain fields where gender plays a crucial role in terms of recruitment. There are still some areas of employment
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which are more suitable for
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men
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than
women
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and vice versa.
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agrees
with
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fact and will
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explicate my opinion. To commence with, there is no denying
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the fact that
men
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and
women
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are physically different. Males are physiologically more heavily built up and possess extra muscular strength, as compared to
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females, which makes them more suitable for performing jobs involving laborious tasks
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as heavy lifting, etc.
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, they were more employed in work involving mechanics and mining.
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, boys are more practical and emotionally stable as compared to girls and can make difficult decisions more conveniently.
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ability makes them more fitted for a job as
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a politician
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, armyman, police officer, etc.
On the other hand
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,
women
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are more passionate and caring, making them an apt candidate for employment
sectors
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,
such
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as education,
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, etc. Females
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the best teachers in the
world
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because they have an innate capacity to preach and impart knowledge.
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, the sensitivity of ladies to oversee and understand the emotional aspect of a person's
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,
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makes them
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excellent social
worker
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and peace promoters.
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, Mother Teresa was a
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world famous
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personality, who won
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the noble
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noble prize
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for promoting peace all over the
world
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.
Apart from
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, there has been an increase in equity, in
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almost
all the
sectors
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, among the two genders. Earlier,
men
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were thought to be best with numbers or science.
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,
women
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have proved to be equal to
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in these fields and have showcased their talents. They have even proved themselves to be fitted for the roles involving more physical activities
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such
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, such
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as
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forces, etc. Henceforth, there is an increase in equality
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the two species in the modern
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.
To conclude
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, we can say that gender used to play an important role in many employment
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.
Men
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were hired more than
women
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for jobs
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as engineers, army officers, mining, etc
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, as
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they have more
body-strength
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body strength
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as compared to females
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were more suited for soft skills
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as teaching, nursing, etc. But,
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trend has drastically shifted in
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the last
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couple of years.
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have now
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to be equally talented and confident to perform almost all the duties that involve both cerebral and physical strength.

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