You want to learn a foreign language to help you in your work .A teacher near where you live is offering lessons in this language . Write a letter to this teacher . in your letter + say how you heard about the language lessons + explain how learning this language will help you in your work + ask some questions about the lessons

Dear Mrs Tran, I am writing

this

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letter to ask about your IELTS General

course

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. In the future, I would like to work in Canada, because I hope that I can focus

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improving my foreign skills. Some days before, I saw the information lecture from a friend. She used to study

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your English

course

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. Currently, she is living and getting a job in Canada. In my opinion, being able to speak another language brings many opportunities

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it helps us communicate with people from different countries, explore new cultures, and achieve a job in an international company. It is a great advantage for our future. With

this

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goal, I want to participate in your IELTS General

course

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. Could you tell me some details about the task’s lesson, and how much time I will spend

for

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the completion progress. One more question,

Iwant

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I want

to know about the tuition fee. And please let me know where the place of class is situated

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apply

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. Sometimes I find it difficult to improve my speaking and listening skills. I would be grateful if you could suggest some methods that can help me practice more effectively in your

course

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. Thank you very much for your attention. I look forward to receiving your response as soon as possible. Best regards, Tam.

quynhtranhbh

Sep 21, 2025

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task

Stay with one main idea in each paragraph and make your point clear. When you mention why you want to learn, give one or two clear examples of how it will help your work.

coherence

In each paragraph, try to keep one idea. Use short linking words like First, Then, Also to show order and make it easy to follow.

tone

Opening and closing are polite.

content

The reason to learn the language is clear and easy to read.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

215 words

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