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Writing Samples
Band 1

the diagram belov showing the structure and use of simple solar panel

presented
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belov
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below
 illustrates the
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skeleton
 and
startegy
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strategy
 of using
simple
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a simple
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 solar
panel
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overall
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, there are given three types of using of
the
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apply
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solar
panel
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. First type displays
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the startegy
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startegy
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strategy
 of how to construct
solar
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a solar
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panel
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.
while
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 in other
particlar
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particular
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 of that item.
To begin
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 with,
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the first
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 stage instructs how to start that mechanism,put
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the glasses
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 on top of
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the box
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.
Secondly
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, scientists explain how
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 mechanism
heat
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converts heat
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 energy
, first
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 sun comes in that
panel
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then
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 cool air
transported
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is transported
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 into it
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then
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, then
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this
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 air will be
warmet
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warmed
within
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help
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the help
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 of
sun
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the sun
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 and itself
of
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apply
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glass
,
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itself, next
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and next
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next
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next,
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 warm air
came
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 out of
outlet
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the outlet
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structure
Use a clear intro that tells the reader what the text will cover.
content
Describe one idea fully in its own part before moving to the next.
language
Check grammar and spelling to make the meaning clear.
structure
The essay shows an effort to talk about more than one idea.
coherence
The use of first and second shows some order in ideas.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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