some scientists think that there are intelligent life forms on other planets and messages should be sent to contact them. Other scientists think it is a bad idea and would be dangerous. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some researchers suggest that messages should be sent to intelligent life forms on other planets to establish contact;
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, others contend that
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actions may expose Earth to severe threats.
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contacting extraterrestrial beings may contribute to advances in
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and medicine, I believe
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initiatives without understanding their intentions
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not an appropriate approach. On the one hand, supporters of
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view argue that sending messages to advanced life forms may enhance knowledge about the environment and
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of medicine. If we were able to contact
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aliens, they may share advanced
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and extensive knowledge. Since humans are combating
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climate
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and incurable diseases,
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valuable information could help to resolve these pressing issues. To exemplify, in history, whenever countries collaborated, they
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several breakthroughs in the field of science and
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collectively.
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, establishing contacts with
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civilisation can fast-track breakthroughs that would
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take centuries.
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, many critics maintain that
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attempts could put Earth in danger. Revealing Earth's location without understanding
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objectives may not only exploit
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natural resources of our planet but
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cause
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destruction
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it
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.
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, history shows that whenever
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nation encountered with underdeveloped
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, the result
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either
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colonisation or exploitation.
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, some scientists believe that
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actions can expose our planet to significant threats
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of progress. In conclusion, despite the fact that extraterrestrial beings may help advance
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and medicine, I strongly discourage the idea of sending messages to them without assessing their objectives, as
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can pose serious problems to humanity.

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content
Make your points clearer by listing them. Start with a view for each side, then give a short result.
structure
Use more easy link words to move from one idea to the next.
language
Fix small grammar problems. Watch verb form and word use (for example ‘combatting’ → ‘fighting’, ‘climate change’, ‘contact with aliens’).
content
Add a small, exact example for each view to show you mean what you say.
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Your view is clear at the end.
structure
You use ‘on the one hand’ and ‘on the other hand’ well.
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Intro and conclusion fit the task.

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

Examples make your writing easier to understand by illustrating points more effectively.

Examples, if used properly, not only help you get higher marks for ‘Task Response’ but also for ‘Coherence’.

When giving examples it is best to put them after your main idea or topic sentence. They can be used in the middle of supporting sentences or they can be used to start a new sentence. There is no rule for where exactly to give examples in essays, logically they would come after your main idea/topic sentence or just after a supporting sentence.

Linking words for giving examples:

  • for example
  • for instance
  • to illustrate this
  • to give a clear example
  • such as
  • namely
  • to illustrate
  • take, for example
Topic Vocabulary:
  • extraterrestrial
  • investigate
  • interstellar
  • speculate
  • communication
  • primitive
  • potential
  • collaboration
  • unlock
  • unprecedented
  • advancement
  • caution
  • consequences
  • hostile
  • unknowingly
  • civilization
  • disrupt
  • evolution
  • preserve
  • ponder
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